25 July 1819: Fanny Brawne & A Brighter Word than Bright
Eglantine Cottage, Shanklin, Isle of Wight


Keats is at the Isle of Wight with his very good friend, the supportive and witty James Rice, who in fact initiates the trip and invites Keats. They arrive the end of June.
From the island, in a series of letters to Fanny Brawne over July and into August, 23-year-old Keats openly expresses great longing, passion, and unequaled love for Fanny. There is a sense that Keats is even a little surprised about how besotted he is with Fanny.

Keats writes to his sweet Girl
(15 July) of her beauty, her lips; of how his heart is
full of her, how he is absorbed
by her, and how he aches to be with her. Echoing a
little of Shakespeare , he writes, I know
not how to express my devotion to so fair a form: I want a brighter word than bright,
a
fairer word than fair
(1 July). But all is not so clear: what evolves into the first
half of 1820 specifically is that one side of Keats desires to be free from thoughts
and
feelings about Fanny, yet this is deeply
conflicted by how he wants to see her and how he imagines her. So while Keats’s deepening
illness imprisons him into 1820, so do thoughts of Fanny, which is expected, given
Keats’s
waning hope for recovery. From the beginning, though, Keats is confused, even confounded,
by
Fanny’s personality, and particularly her somewhat flirtatious manner—Keats’s uneven
jealousy
emerges quite early. Some of Keats’s friends are also clearly, and openly, not so
keen on
Fanny. She is also aware of this, which further complicates their relationship.
Keats does not feel well for much of July. He may have caught a cold or infection
on the way
to the island via Portsmouth as he passes through a storm and unseasonably cold weather;
as
usual, it manifests itself in his chronically-vulnerable throat, something that Keats
himself
notes (letters, 6 July) and that can be traced back about a year earlier while on
his northern
walking expedition into Scotland. Rice is himself
very ill during the month; this, Keats says, weighs upon me day and night
(letters, 31
July); it probably forces recollections of nursing his younger brother Tom as Tom slid toward death in the last months of 1818.
Although Keats finds the area pleasant, he seems to require something more from the
landscape,
something more large and overpowering
to fully impress him (31 July).
So, too, are concerning portions of Keats’s energies taken up with financial anxieties relative to family funds. After Tom’s death in December 1818, these funds are necessarily shuffled and made even more uncertain; and now his brother, who has emigrated to America, is also going through serious financial difficulties. Keats is left to negotiate most of this through the trustee of the funds, the often-unaccommodating Richard Abbey. Remarkably, Keats is unaware that he has access to fairly significant family funds (mind you, Abbey himself seems unaware of these funds, which were established for Keats and his siblings by his maternal grandfather); he has been living off ever-diminishing credit for a few years.

Keats’s ostensible purpose on the Isle of Wight is (as he writes to his sister) to try the
fortune of my Pen once more, and indeed I have some confidence in my success
(6 July).
Keats here refers to a play he is co-writing with his very good and extremely generous
friend,
Charles Brown—titled Otho the Great.
That is, he hopes to make some money from the staged tragedy, write an innovative
play, and
recover something of his reputation as a writer. Keats also works on the first part
of Lamia, a poem aimed to deliberately stir and attract readers’
attentions; he leaves off the poem until late August; it is published in Keats’s last
collection, the 1820 volume. If none of these efforts succeed, Keats once more says
he may
fall back upon his medical qualifications to support himself.
Brown arrives toward the end of the third week of July, and they work hard on the play. Otho the Great is accepted by the end of the year for production in the following theatre season, but Keats and Brown, perhaps too eager for success (and Keats too anxious for cash), withdraw it; they try another theatre, and it is rejected. The play then lingers and fades. Clearly they should have taken the first offer.
On the evening of 25 July, after a day mainly taken up with working on Lamia, Keats writes another letter to Fanny. Keats’s manages to hit the dramatic—or maybe
melodramatic—in his passions: [H]ow I ache to be with you: how I would die for one hour [. . .] I have two luxuries
to brood over in my walks, your Loveliness and the hour of my death
(25 July).
Keats perhaps writes his Shakespearean sonnet, Bright Star, during
this month, since the letters to her contain many celestial references, and his feelings
for
her are couched in terms of constancy and intensity. (October 1819 is also a possible
time of
composition.) There may be hints in his imagistic thinking when, in a letter to Fanny, 1 July, he looks for a brighter word than
bright
to express his devotion to so fair a form.
In the same vein, Keats ends
the 25 July letter with, I will imagine you Venus tonight and pray, pray, pray to your star
like a Heathen. / Your’s ever, fair Star / John Keats.
The sonnet is uncluttered and
accomplished, and strikes the right tone of deep yet dignified passion. By any standard,
it is
strong poem that uses the established trope of a steadfast heavenly body, only to
both adopt
and trump that quality to suit and accent the speaker’s more unique condition. (A
very bright
comet that was making the news in the first week of July and that Keats saw may also
have
inspired the poem’s idea.) However, when we read the sonnet with Keats/Fanny in mind,
we fall
more heavily upon the conditional and personal anguish that ends the poem—or else swoon to
death.
As with much of Keats’s poetry, it ends by looking forward, to positing a
conditional future, to what might come.