14 March 1819: A Medical Future or Great Poetry? A Pivotal Keatsian Moment
Church Row, Hampstead


The residence of the Davenports, where, 14 March 1819, Keats dines and then has a
nap. I
cannot bear a day annihilated in this way,
Keats writes; and in a letter of 17 March to
his brother George and his wife, Georgiana, he goes on to distinguish between a
positive and negative form of indolence—broadly, speculative vs. empty indolence.
The subject
continues into the same journal-letter, but a few days later, on 19 March, Keats attempts
to
parse indolence along with notions of faintness, laziness, languor, carelessness,
and
effeminacy. He wonders about this conflated state and general awareness, and he concludes:
This is the only happiness; and is a rare instance of advantage in the body overpowering
the Mind.
The dating is unclear, but perhaps after or around 19 March (and definitely before
9 June), Keats in fact writes a poem called Ode on Indolence (first published 1848; Keats apparently did not think enough of it to want it in
his final 1820 collection). The poem, which seems to statically ruminate more than
creatively explore, is good but not great; we wait for the three figures of Love,
Ambition, and Poesy to challenge the speaker, but they do not raise him. There is,
however, a moment when we perhaps get a sense of Keats’s great poetry to come: at
the end of the poem, when the speaker bids farewell to the three unrousing figures,
the speaker tells of visions
to come—genuine visions that might break the hold that idleness has on him.
And so, in a way, the Ode
on Indolence points to or partly slow-triggers (or is at least an addendum to)
perhaps the most remarkable string of poems in the history of English poetry, all
of which
take up the emotional and philosophical dialectics of joy and sorrow, suffering and
beauty,
pain and bliss, immortality and loss, of time-still and time-moving, and materiality
and
eternity. These poems are often referred to as the great odes
—and they are indeed
great. The order of their composition is not clear. The odes in slightly varying ways
are
applications of Keats’s developed poetics, beginning with his idea of Negative
Capability
(letters, 27 Dec 1817) through to the camelion
poetical
character (letters, 27 Oct 1818) and the creative potential of the disinterested mind
(1letters, 9 March 1819). They also mark ingenious innovations on or adaptations of
the sonnet
form in order to play off a desired voice, preciseness in phrasing, and turns in thoughts
that
are at once subtle and strong.

During March, Keats makes a willed resolution: never to write for the sake of writing, or
making a poem, but from running over with any little knowledge and experience which
many
years of reflection may perhaps give me—otherwise I will be dumb
(letters, 8 March).
This is a significant self-assessment of Keats’s regard for his earlier work, and
it comes at
pivotal moment, given what he is about to accomplish. He clearly implies that he has
previously written merely for the sake of writing (Endymion
comes to mind, as do most of the poems in his first collection), and that he has written
little with mature reflection. If he cannot write with greater and more considered
intention,
he will be silent. At the same time, Keats declares he has some satisfaction of having
great conceptions,
but that he will not spoil my love of gloom by writing an ode to
darkness.
He concludes, I am three and twenty with little knowledge and middling
intellect.
He’s coyly modest and a little playful here, since he knows that Haydon
considers him destined for greatness.
This is all complex and interesting, given that shortly Keats will in fact compose
odes that
move toward darkness, yet turn gloom’s character back upon itself: his Ode to a Nightingale
particularly comes to mind, but instead of a love of gloom
that ends in some final or
wallowing darkness, Keats leaves us with a memorable phrase—tender is the night
—and the
temporal challenge of consciousness and dream.
Keats at this moment also sounds his poetic independence from what he calls that most
vulgar of all crowds the literary.
Keats remains stuck with his fragment Hyperion, and as he assesses his options, he entertains the
possibility of having to earn a living beyond poetry (letters, 15 March). Keats’s
state—and
finances—are such that the family trustee, Richard
Abbey, suggests Keats enter the hat-making business. On 19 March, he notes,
Neither Poetry, nor Ambition, nor Love have any alertness of countenance as they pass
by
me.
And he goes on to note the world has few moments of pleasure: Circumstances are
like Clouds continually gathering and bursting,
with his conclusion that Very few men
have ever arrived at a complete disinterestedness of Mind.
He wonders what purposes
humankind share, and he wonders if any of his speculations—straining at particles of light
in the midst of a great darkness
—have any bearing on anything. His goal is to make
poetry of controlled intensity out of that straining.
All of this makes clear that, in March, Keats approaches a make-or-break point, with, on one hand, indolence, laziness, listlessness, uncertainties, various serious anxieties, and a lack of creative buoyancy; and, on the other hand, the very real need to forge some kind of stable future. Keats remains afloat, but barely. He has very real fears that he may not have prospects that involve poetry. Paradoxically, this in-between condition may within weeks inspire Keats to begin to compose poetry that reflects his more direct sensibilities and intellect, rather than more unproductive motivations that have to do with pride, fame, judgment, pleasing others, and writing for its own sake. To use his own terms from this month, he will write with the knowledge and experience he has built up and thought deeply upon, and he will do so with profound reflection and tonal composure.
Keats does manage to write a generally underrated sonnet—Why did I laugh tonight?— that captures the depth of his personal uncertainties and the nature of his conflicted, complex temperament. The sonnet, though self-directed, also translates into subjects that outline a more universal human condition: doubt, solitude, mortality, striving, intensity, and frailty. The poem will not be published for more than a quarter of a century after Keats’s death.
As usual, and as mentioned, finances plague Keats into March: not only does he attempt to procure more family money from the balky Abbey (the family trustee), but the same time, his affectionate friend, the painter Benjamin Robert Haydon, continues to press Keats for a loan. Keats’s own situation makes this almost impossible, and it creates tensions between the two friends, who have been great supporters of each other since October 1816, when they first met via Leigh Hunt, the publisher, poet, and journalist. (Haydon, alas, likes to believe they share the mantle of genius.) Likewise, questions about his own health linger from chronic throat and health issues, which Keats mentions have bothered him for about a year.